I like the concept and quite enjoyed the gameplay, the artwork is good too.
It is a little too hard for me to enjoy enough to continue playing, I couldn't get past the first boss, even after reading the hints, would have liked a little longer playing the regular game before getting there to be honest, to have more of a chance to get to grips with controlling the character.
I'd also recommend some grammar checks for the writing.
But it definitely shows promise and with a little more work I can see it being a fun game!