This game is cool, I think it has some good aspects. I don't quite understand what's happening? It goes from talking about Jak to Joe? Then Joe dies? I'm not sure... interesting though. I think the story hops around too much personally. It also introduces new characters very fast and gets rid of characters very fast, it feels like the player missed an epilogue (to me at least). The loading at the start of the game is also quite slow. Hopefully, you can continue to work on this project and fix these things. I do like some of the art though it's neat. Most of these things are easy to fix also so hope to see more!