I'm lucky the ISP I was able to get is a good one!
I noticed that with Ina, she feels the MC is the closest thing she has to a friend and while they give each other grief a LOT, I suspect that's because she feels she can tease him in a friendly way. Siofra I'm curios on, and Alicia...as in Selendis's daughter Alicia? Or just someone who shares the name?
One thing I noticed revisiting the "report to Selendis" action. She mentions a "possible compromise, where everyone is unhappy" Shouldn't that be everyone is happy? I realize compromises aren't great sometimes, but if everyone is unhappy about it...
And if anyone says you can't learn things from video games, I had to find out what an awl was after seeing Gareth refer to himself as one. Therefore, video games have expanded my knowledge of tools!