I had a great time with this game. The character designs are top notch, and I was so invested in what happens to Ritsu. The centipede imagery was disgusting, and I'm going to feel really weird about eating pasta for a while.
I don't know if the story will be more straightforward in future updates, but I love how understated the ending with Kazuya and the ring is.
I also love that you included "Put Out My Eyes." It's such a striking poem, and it fits the game so well.
Consider me a fan! I look forward to following this project and seeing what happens with the story!