Really well done. Had a lot of fun reading. Love the ideas in here. I especially like the telegraphing you did in the mini coliseum. Totally gonna steal that idea. Well done.
Thank you. I knew my ideas were going to have to be what shined since my art and layout are both eclipsed by most of the other submissions.
I thought the layout and art were very fitting and evocative.
I appreciate that, thank you.
