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Very psychological in vibe...I dig that.  Like the references to other psychological stories.  There is a lot going on, so the note-taking player in me is giddy.  

Clean layout...only suggestion would be to see what a 16 page format might do for breaking up some of the text (post 6-8 in particular), give a but more gutter space perhaps.  However this isn't much of an issue just more of a curiosity.

Love the rich NPC characters. And find myself wanting to know more of their backstories...opens up prequel modules as a possibility.  Cheers

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Appreciate your insight! My original intention was to pack as much “happenings” within the format, if you don’t consider it too much, that’s a win for me!

It’s my fist time creating a document like this and I agree it would benefit from better readability. The learning process for what I was able to put together was pretty time consuming. As I create more content, I’ll make sure to improve the layout. There was going to be art in this, but unfortunately time limitations prevented that from happening, so when this is revised, it will have quite a handful of them as well :)

I left some details intentionally open for speculation! Some of these might become more modules in the future, including these and more characters!

Can't wait to see what you release