Such an interesting story! I can't wait to hear the music and SFX when you add it in a later build. Does our MC have a name? I think it's Caligo, but I wasn't clear. Is it intentional that it's missing from the dialogue box?
Some things to consider:
- make the mothers different names when the game starts because it was hard to distinguish between which sprite was speaking with just font color differences and a faint border color around the sprite.
- add like "gothic" as a game tag for users to find and play.
- add a few sentences before the game giving a preference to this universe/world. It seems like people turning into demons is common, so bring that up.
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Ah, sorry it is Caligo, didn't realize that wasn't obvious, I'll see if I can work that in. When she talks, her name shows up, and when it's internal dialogue, it's left blank. I was a little worried about the mother thing, so I'll see to that! Thanks for playing, and for the really helpful feedback, I'll do my best to implement those changes :)