Your concept is bold and infectious, and the execution makes it all feel deeply personal! Feelings, emotions, and mental blocks are sometimes kind of sidelined or ignored in TTRPGs in favor of external dramas. My own mid gremlins loved reading this! Though they might not be able to keep up with all the ideas here, it's still clearly great!
One thing I'd recommend is doing another pass after the jam for spelling, grammar, etc. A few words felt like speech-to-text or a phone's autocorrect got in the way. But that never stopped me from getting the meaning!