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Kudos for giving us a truly unique setting!  I love exploring the less obvious, but no less mystical locations such as a salt flat.  The maps have a lot of character, and I'm loving it.  Good job with the perspective on them too (that's my weakness).  Feedback for your consideration: Because you present such a unique location and story, I would offer a few examples of hooks to get existing parties started on the path to the flats, and have them learn the information gradually rather than having the buy-in all at once.  Additionally, as others have noted, I would rearrange things like "Factions, Rumors, and Magic Items (consider adding this title)" to the front of the booklet.  This might give the reader a better sense of what they can expect at first glance.  Either way, I enjoyed the read.  Well done!

You're right that having hooks would be a good addition and take a load off the GMs back. I truly appreciate the feedback and am glad you enjoyed my setting .