"Thugs meet for a pint, or worse, a plot." Man there is some really great writing in here! And I'm obsessed with your art! Especially the way you sliced up the Farrance Bunkhouse!
Like you've said in some comments below, it feels like we need some more meat. It feels like the prologue to adventure, I'm confused at when the players enter the scene. Are the events things the players must witness? Or are they events that have passed before they arrive? I'm sure a talented GM can stitch these pieces together, but I was a bit confused. I'm admittedly newer to the OSR though, only been playing a few months now :)
The tone and the vibe really sing, it feels so cohesive! You've definitely earned my follow XD can't wait to read more!