Hey, this is a great adventure! I will focus on the art that is my specialty:
- I have to say that the illustrations in general are excellent.
- The diegetic elements as the letter and map as an intro to the adventure are a great touch.
- The dissected house is really awesome! and you also added top floor minimaps to ensure usability wich is always welcome.
- Even the graphic design is original, like that innovative way of listing items in page 6!
Maybe I'm biased by my love for coastal settings and art in general, but this one is my favorite entry so far, a really high quality work!