I love the last 2 sentences of the Introduction paragraph. The artwork throughout is absolutely killer. Well laid out and I like the choice of no color.
You built several interesting scenarios and did a good job making the Orcs feel threatening. I liked the Foreword but I don't think it's crucial information, it might be better placed at the end of the booklet as an extra rather than before the adventure.
I like the varied puzzles, traps and hazards in the two sets of dungeon rooms. Great job with the variety offered in the Exploration and Orc Incursion tables on page 6.
You might consider removing the label "story hooks" from the "lore" or rumor table on page 6 - they're all interesting but they're mostly more informative than adventure starting.
I also liked the commentary on the final page, it might be a good fit closer to the front if you find room for it.
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Thanks for taking the time to read it. Appreciate the constructive feedback as well regarding layout. I struggled with the right term for that "Story Hooks and Lore" section, the goal was to provide some plot points you can inject in different places to help bring cohesion to the diverse dungeons to help with narrative if needed. Definitely something I'll think about in the future.