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hi everyone.

i maybe found a bug: in chapter 3 when you reach the circle and prepare to go down, if you choose to ignore the builders hand and bravel venture forth, the next page calls him Lion. the page after that, he is called builder again.

maybe i misremember/missed something, but i dont think that he has intorduced/named himself, right?

Fir & Fireweed44 days ago (3 edits) (+1)

Oh crud! Thank you for pointing that out! That option was added recently, after I've already gotten used to calling him Lion.

I’ll change and update it, thank you for letting me know!

Blook8844 days ago

no problem

Blook8844 days ago

another typo: if you decide to share your thoughts about the guard with Heron, in the second passage, one sentence starts with "My being a healer. ..." unless its intentionel, it should be "me".

Fir & Fireweed44 days ago(+1)

That is intentional. Both versions are grammatically correct. 😊

Blook8844 days ago

oh sorry then. english is not my native language so it sounded a little off to me.

anothe rsmall bug: when i finished chapter 9 and click on "continue ith chapter 10" i got an error message with 2 options: return one page or hard reset. i chose the return one page option and then it worked fine.

Fir & Fireweed44 days ago(+1)

I think that error happened because I re-uploaded the story while you were playing it 😅 Should be fine otherwise!

And no worries, I appreciate the feedback, thank you!

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