I found some minor flaws in the text.
Can I upload the corrected version here?
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Yes, I'd recommend that for clarity: for any updates you make to the patch from now on, post a comment on the devblog announcement for the Chinese translation (so right here, like you did!), with a quick explanation, version number (this would be 2 obviously), and link to the new version. When I see it I'll update the link in the main text to point to the new patch (and indicate which version it points to now).