I really think that the cover art for this game looks really great.
I noticed some grammatical errors in some of the text.
The game is a really cute exploration and collection based game. I do wish that the backgrounds were a little more detailed but I understand that can be difficult to do especially in pulp. I know that an amazing example of some well done scenery in pulp is Quest for the X.
I love that there are different endings for this game as well.
Overall I think this is a great short experience and I would just love to see a little more from the game in terms of background artwork and maybe more things to interact with.