Such a gigantic and really good-looking world with a deep story. The main area of improvement here is the gameplay aspect, but this game was aiming to be more of a story game, so I can't really say how you would fix that. I love the prior game jam easter eggs. Also, the attention to detail in the legal stuff was cool as well, as I don't see that much in jam games. I also participated in ludum dare: tiny creatures, and did this right after lol.
Great entry!