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Hi Chainsaw, I've been playing the game since I discovered it with the Hoenn update, and now with the full Sinnoh update, I'm not happy with some things and  I would like to change, I don't want to pressure you to do so, but I will be happy if you accept my changes, in order of priority these are the changes:

High Priority: I'm very dissatisfied with the birth scenes and general downtime events (ex: "They're all cute"), because I have all the girls (including Sub and Mythical), and I feel like I (as MC) had all priority with Mewtwo and all the other Legendary category Pokemon in their childbirths and I will ignore the other girls (Sub and Mythical), the same goes for 'They are all cute' and similar downtime events in the other regions. It's not fair to me that I (MC) put all my attention on the Legend girls and don't spend the walk in the park with the others. I want to interact with all the girls and see the Birth (or laying of eggs) of the girls I caught and not just see their photos after birth in the Pregnancy Checkup, it makes me think that in the story of my game the girls Sub and Mythics are annoyed at me because I don't see their eggs coming. Do you understand me? 

Oh, and I would like to have the option to choose to fuck any trio (ex: lake trio or Kanto birds) in  any hole  just a hole by girl is testrictive (and of course I prefer their vaginas, but I can't access, for example,to  Giratina's pussy because she wants to be fucked in the ass). That's fine, but since the sexual events are repetitive, it should be best for you to choose a girl and the part you want to fuck, and after repeat the same thing if you want with the other (in my case) or have the player choose another option with another girl. You can leave out his favorite hole (example for Giratina: Ass (favorite). I say this because I didn't like the lake trio options (Asself, Mouthsprit, and Puxie), and that was... well, as I say, restrictive in the game.

Medium Priority (up to you, totally optional): Bro, I don't like futa girls, because it's... well, Latios is male and you can find 50% Heatran in both genders in the original game. But you can put up a flag that doesn't show futa girls. In the case of Latios (if you put girl instead of male), you can put a lore that says that when Latios was born, they saw that she was a Latias but with the color blue, but they called them Latios after the species of the father, and Latios says which is actually a Latias but the skin color is a genetic cause. If you put Latios as male, the MC can take him with himself, and Latios can participate in threesome, fucking her sis or another Legendary in her mouth or ass while the MC fuck her in other hole.That's totally optional,but if you change Heatran to full female and Latios beign full male or full female that will be great the only girls fans

Middle -Low Priority (Lore Changes):Is not best that Giratina should be Arceus sister instead of her daughter?,I see in that way because creates the great constrast (Arceus is order,Giratina is chaos,'Distorsion').That doesn't show when Giratina is Arceus daughter.And will be the great rival sisters (Giratina:.....Sister....../Arceus:So that's the way that you greet your sister after long years in that silly cave?.I see that this Human take you from the jail that I send you,or it was your house? *Chuckles with a little malice*) 

They will be like Celestia and Luna from My little pony,but Giratina is a Luna 1000000% furious and chaotic in contrast with the peaceful mare of the night

Other thing that I want to recommend you(This is appreciate that you could take in consideration)is that best that the other Pokémon fighters  from Gen 5 to up don't overdue the 90 HP of Arceus,to make her the most powerful Pokémon to defeat in combat(is the GODdess of the Pokémon World,that makes sense).

Oh and I want to personalize the MC,I don't like that is Human mid ditto.It should be great that you can be a Pokémon with the char that is currently the  MC be your father and you obtain your mother species and the human speak and the changing cock from your father,then Maples find you and your father and both of you accept that you will be the Legendary Pokémon Breeder(with the analysis in order),put green light to your mission.The beginning of your father being a Pokebreeder like your grandmother(the MC'mother currently) and explain that ocurred similary situation of your grandparents (the female human and the Ditto)with your father and mother (your father with his ability Charm seduces your mother and the naughty union is you,and your father along with your mother train you) it should be great for the Pokémon form background.

And I see coming the fucking battle with Arceus inclusive when she say that first she was putting a quiz.(MC (me)in his mind and me in the real life in Spanish:a Quiz? That...oh no,this is too easy,there was no obstacles.Is coming a...?A shit/Arceus in battle mode:Are you ready to conquer me? /Me:You,Chainsaw (murmuring annoyed ).Ah shit,here we go again.


Well if you are with the next region development and are you bussy (or is your laziness XD,I understand) for do all my changes(especially the childbirth, downtime events and the Arceus and Giratina parentages changes),is ok.The Game is 10/10,I can handle it,my heart will be broken,and I will be dissapointed with the changes don't occur but Thumb up from Cuba,greetings from Obed (Firewolf)

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First off, thanks for the feeback, but I'm afraid I'm going to have to disappoint you here.

I write things the way I do to try and cut down on the work I need to make this game, the extra changes you've talked about would all mean a LOT more writing and in some cases coding for me and that's just not what I want to do.
The main priority for me when making this is that I have fun doing it and if it becomes too much work, then I stop having fun and the game would never get updated.

Like making Heatran a pure girl and not a futa, that means twice the writing every time I try to include her in a scene, it's just not worth it for me to put in that kind of effort.


One thing you suggested that I will do however, no Mon is getting more HP than Arceus, not unless there's a story reason for them to have that much, which there usually won't be

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Well thanks for the answer,it's a lot of job,and I know that it's a lot of coding and writing,I can handle with that content,that you put the girls with her eggs layed in Pregnancy Checkup is something.

Oh another feedback is that mention "your Kanto's children behind Maple",instead "Mewtwo's children behind Maple" in the Post-sinnoh region text (after the part of the Hoenn Legendary birth labor) it could be more general,don't you think? In that way you mention Mewtwo 's and also all other girls's (including Kanto sub and Myth)children (well you don't have one child with Mewtwo).That change counts,it just a few words.And implement the ambiguity  helps to the gameplay lore of the player  that catched all girls (in this case me).Same thing goes for later text with the mention of your children(not counting Pikachu's children,in that moment (Start of Hoenn I think) is obvious that they are the unique children in Maple's house)

And it's a pleasure to help in a game that makes my dream of becoming father in the near future becomes real.Your welcome👍👍👌

I guess I could change that part, I left it as just Mewtwo since she's the only one the player is guaranteed to have with them.

That's why I focus most of the content on the Main Legends too since that's what you're 100% certain to see.