So first of all, great take on the theme, it's always good to see original ideas. It also has a great vibe, with the selfie allergy as well, but I was chuckling when the music first switched to pursuer mode.
There are some things to improve that would mean a lot, but I see they were pointed out already by others, so I won't echo them.
Also, I think I found a safe space, away from the fans, so I'll just settle down here:
