The visual style and music are fantastic! I think focusing on the story is definitely worth developing further. I have to agree with other comments that it gets a bit hard to follow the plot near the end. But I believe you have a complete vision of the story—it just needs a little tweaking for the average player to make it a bit easier to follow. I’m sure you’ll manage this since adding a few extra scenes could help. Thank you for the game! :)
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I'm making a second chapter and a third chapter that will definitely add more context. I wanted the player to slowly piece the plot together as they are reading the story. The first one is mostly supposed to ask questions and seek a player's curiosity. Just thought I'd mention that, still happy people are playing it though!