Hi! Thank you for sending the link to your game.
Positives:
- Great music that really immerses you in the game’s world.
- The visuals, music, and narrative combine to depict a surreal world where cruelty and exploitation are taken to the extreme.
- I loved the strange character designs. It would be great to see what the employers look like to give players a clearer picture of the world.
Negatives:
- At the start, it was unclear who was speaking in the dialogue. Later, I realized the protagonist is completely silent and is just told what to do.
- I didn’t love the mission structure. It might work better if the player joins one company where they start with low pay and get promoted every month, going through interviews repeatedly. Meanwhile, the landlord could increase the rent every month. I feel this linear structure would fit better, and the choice of company seems unnecessary.
Conclusion: The game is cool, but I found the last company too difficult, and I’m embarrassed to say I didn’t discover all the endings. I enjoyed the strange world you created, and I hope you continue to develop it in future games. Thanks for the game!