Excellent job on this. The world building was incredible. It was descriptive and engaging. The work and effort put into this is impressive. The achievements were a nice addition too. English isn't your first language, and you created this is crazy. Lastly, nice submission time. I don't think I've even been that close.
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I had a stopwatch on my phone and even joked with some jam buddies, which was a heart attack speed run! I needed until the last second to have something up and running from start to finish, and in two days. I managed to make the biggest spelling correction and bug fixes in 2 days, I would need a third day look to get the idiomatic expressions to flow. But these are grammatical details, not conceptual ones (For example, changing the term "spotlight" because I thought it was anachronistic in the context, even though it is an understandable figure of speech.) Now it's in a stable version.
I'm very happy that this time my English is improving and it wasn't a problem. I enrolled in an online English course that's free, I feel like it's helping me have a better etymological understanding because my use of English, as it's self-taught, is pure association. I know what a word means in my native language and I can connect the meaning in English, and disassemble the words to "create" words, through the logic of joining and a lot of research on prosaic verbs so that I can keep the transitive coherent.
But I'm really bad :P Every grammar test I take in English, I get 3/10 or, if I'm very lucky, 4/10, but I try not to get discouraged, especially because I keep getting the pronouns mixed up, because in my head it would have to be he-his-him and she-shis-shim. kkkkkkkkkk In fact, there were some parts in act 2 at launch where I accidentally committed this atrocity without having time to check the spelling kkkkkk
Thank you very much for playing, I hope Siham's journey has been interesting in some way. ͙͘͡★