I like the transfer of the motif across voices and you created a really satisfying loop! Echoing others that this definitely feels beyond beginner so hopefully you feel a more confident after this 🥳 if I could give any suggestions, I think you could try being more a little more adventurous harmonically (everything is pretty much diatonic in minor) and you could play with the rhythm and placement of the motif more - but that's just icing on top. Great work!
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Thank you it means a ton! And your feedback is appreciated! I will definitely try and explore harmonics more, I always like when songs have tons of non-scale notes and I am kind of realizing from your feedback I'd like to practice on it more to improve that area! I may end up going back to the song file just to experiment with rhythms too!
Also, I remember you from the sandbox jam, it is nice to see you here as well!