First off, kudos on performing a vocal piece. The guitar performance is good and the fuzz tone has a nice creamy texture. Personally I would've liked it if you had let the whole note at the end of the solo (2:24) ring out a bit longer, maybe gradually fade it out as the vocals came back in? I also felt"haaaave" at 1:23 could've used a little more breath support. But those are just nitpicks, really cool song overall!