Nice inclusion of real world sounds, can really appreciate the crow sound effect. The ambience is next level, would love to see you expand on the idea of inlcuding background sound effects with the piece. I really think your pieces have the ability to transcend music and frolic in the field of story telling without words. Slowly fading in human ambiences, what comes to mind is the soundscapes you may hear walking through a crowd in assassins creed.
But just my two cents, Love the work.
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