Ok, so this one felt more like we were being dropped into the middle of a story, but there was zero exposition to explain anything up to that point. Who is Amber? Who is Rondo? Why are they being chased? What is the wraith? Why was a cop cussing them out? What do witches have to do with any of it? With stories like this, you really need to explain things, even if there is supposed to be a bigger mystery. Needs some more work, but at least it didn't softlock, which honestly is an accomplishment for a first time RM dev.