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Oooh, thank you for writing this thorough comment! :D I'm glad it made your morning fun!

Haha Pippa is a carefree airhead without a worry in her life. I have a lot of fun writing this kind of characters since (I don't know if you'd get this) it sometimes pleasantly surprises me how she would react to various things I would throw at her. I mean, I know I created her, but when I wrote her dialogues, I didn't plan anything, I just put her in various situations and let her react, hahaha...

The OSTs are amazing!! You should take a look at Dalton's page and see his other creations. Working with him was a joy!

OMG - you went to the library!! So many video playthroughs that I watched and no one went to the library hahaha >_< It was one of the least animated scene, but I loved it! The soundtrack is lovely and the librarian - as you mentioned - gave a hilarious dead-pan stare hahaha.

Aah I'm glad to hear that about the camera moves! I struggled so hard with it, I had a family member helped me figure out so many things with it since it frustrated me and I still had to do many other things. I don't know how to describe this without getting too long, but I had ATL issues of camera panning and zooming that keeps jumping around(?), I can describe more to you in DM if you're interested to know more though, but it's more or less okay now, I guess? Noone reported any bug so far haha (please keep it that way... lol...)

Aaah that money issue... Believe me, I was so worried about it! I only realised this huge plot hole (if I can say so?) at the end of the third week of Spooktober, as I started doing lots of coding and testing. I realised: "Wait a minute... I could spend all I want in food and I don't really have any consequences though??" and I panicked hahaha, like, no way - I only realised this now?? I looked back at the flowchart I made before and never did I care about heightening the urgency of MC's money, although I stressed in the beginning of the story about it's importance. It became a little bit weird if you overthink it... But with the Spooktober's time limit, I did my best to shoo that thought away and focus in polishing the build I was working on. ;-;

(If you have ideas about improving this without significantly rewriting the story, if not at all, let me know please!)

Ending 3 is supposedly the true ending! Ending 2 could have been longer and it felt unfinished, yes, but alas, time limit prevented me to write it further. 

Thank you so much for your time in writing this thorough review and letting me know about those points! I'll get back to this at some point in near future to rework on what can be done with as little rewriting as possible since I've already loved this VN so much as is! :D