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Thank you very much!! 🍦

Aaa don't worry about it! You're fine! >,<

Regarding their relationship, I consider them at a state when they're comfortable with each other already. So the messy apartment inner thought-comment, questioning MC's silly girlfriend taste is and even the remark about her about losing weight (bcs presumably she mentioned about it before) were all out of MC being honest and comfortable with her. Also, she doesn't tolerate liars (she mentioned it in-game), so I assumed at some point when they started the relationship, they agreed to be honest and open with each other no matter what. I personally like this kind of relationship, so I wrote this with that in mind. :D

In this case, she's fine with all of those and she's not hurt in any way, so don't worry, all is good! They're in a really comfortable relationship together. ^^ I also tried to gave MC options to support her in various ways; either by comforting her feelings or solving her problems. It was quite interesting to write her various reactions to the choices.

Nevertheless I agree with you, it's kind to support our partners and care for their tastes and well-being! Obviously, if we know our partner isn't fine with any of these comments, it's within our judgement to make the best reactions out of the situation.

In this case, MC, um, we tried our best! And she actually moved on pretty fast from this, she's a very happy-go-lucky character. I like her a lot hehe.

And aaa I'm glad you noticed the duck socks!!! I'd love to have one too... 🦆🦆

Thank you very much! It's nice to read your thoughts! ^^ 🍦

Thank you very much Yui!!! 🍦

I know some people would be interested in this ice cream... Though personally I don't eat spicy stuff myself haha ^^;;

I'm glad to hear that!! ^^ Thank you very much!! 🍦

Aaa thank you so much!! I loved watching this, it was really fun!! ^o^ 🍦

Ooh, I see... :O I still have a lot to learn. How would you do it? Can you ever so kindly teach me how to make a good animation? 🙏

Aah... I guess you were part of the unlucky ones to not get a chance to taste this limited edition ice cream... 😔 Better luck next time!

Aaa thank you so much! 🍦

Goodness, I felt so bad ;;A;; like noooo I just want to let poor angel free... Had to explore all endings hoping the 3rd ending is a good one, but that plot twist OMG-- that's so well done!! I'm so shocked aaa!! And I'm happy that we could release the angel ;-;

Well done!! Thank you for making this! ^^

Wow!! This is really, really cool!! :D It really does feel like there are six bite-sized stories, and I love how different each of them. It's keeping me on my toes, what's the next story... Let me play again, I keep playing...

Ah, it's hard to pick a favourite, but probably The Hero has the most exciting plot twist for me!

I loved this a lot, what a fun experience! I loved the BGM a lot too, it gets the vibe really nicely.

Thank you for making this! <3

Aaw, this was a really cute experience. I always enjoy ghosts and stops-before-afterlife stories, they're always nice and bittersweet. I'm so glad the brothers reunited and for me they're more sincere than stubborn ;-; I hope they realised that. It's probably a good self-reminder to not hold grudge and be sincere with others before it's too late...

I also loved the rain ambience, makes it really melancholy and sweet. I love it a lot!!

Thank you for making this. <3

Absolutely drowned by the melancholy vibe, this is a beautiful writing! <3 I could feel the MC's blurry feeling, the ocean waves sound was actually very calming and keeping me (or MC) stay in thought. I somehow also thought that MC is describing about the lighthouse inside us, the one that we all can rely on to find our ways when it's rough. It's a beautiful reassurance for all of us that somewhere inside us, something, or someone, will be there for us, leading us to the road ahead. May MC find solace in the weary heart. Have a good rest, the storm will pass by.

Thank you so much for making this! I enjoyed it. ^-^

This was very fun! I also thought we attacked the enemies with meatbuns, that would be really cute haha >,<

Thank you for making this! <3

Aaah, how sweet ;-; this reminds me to cherish the ones I care a lot and live in the present for them <3

The typos and mistakes can be ironed out with proofreading session, this is a nice experience! VnP should be able to help proofread your script ^^

Thank you for making this!

That's a really interesting plot-twist, if we can say so! That's quite a profound message... I hope Gary will feel better!

Thank you for making this! <3

Aaa my heart ;;-;; this is beautiful.

I found myself cheering Sisyphus on his journey! Having feelings is good! Please take some time to rest and recover. If the boulder is too heavy, it's okay to say it is heavy! In a way, we are all alone -- but if all of us are alone, doesn't that also mean we are all in this together? So, it's okay. ;-; You're okay! You're alright! And by doing something, anything, no matter how small -- that's the mark of you. I think that's really nice! You're doing great! Do you want to push the boulder? Yeah, sure! Nope, that's fine! You're really strong regardless of your choice! Do you need a hand? Can you do more? We're all in this together. I'll cheer for you from the bottom of my heart!

((My thoughts when playing this-- Aaa helen's writing always tug my heartstrings... Thank you very much for writing this, it's really lovely <3))

I love the art, very soft colours and cute characters! It's strangely relaxing and comforting (even when they're trapped >,<), the music is lovely, and the pacing is really nice. I enjoyed my experience! Thank you for making this! <3

Waa I'm glad to hear that! It was a lot of fun working in this... Thank you very much!! ^o^ I enjoyed the playthrough!!

Aa thank you very much!! ^__^ 🍦

Hahaha I enjoyed the playthrough!! >o< Thank you very much!! 🍦

Thank you very much for the kind words!! ;o; I had lots of fun making this. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it!! 🧡🍎

Aaa I'm glad to hear that! This was my first time incorporating gauge bars and multiple endings, it was a fun week working on this! Thank you so much for playing!! ^o^ 🍦

I'm glad to hear that!! Thank you very much!! ^-^ 🍦

Aaa I'm glad to hear that!! <3 Writing this very-packed VN took me really long, I'm glad I was able to condense everything under 1,000 word limit. I'm glad this cheered you up... Thank you very much for playing!! 🍦

Wow, this is the first time I heard about this software...! I checked it a bit, it looks really cool. Thank you for sharing! ^^

OMG, yes! +1 to more stories and lores of Shavil!! QAQ I enjoyed the experience a lot. I loved the art so much!! Very beautifully eerie background and beautiful Shavil!! His small blush and his final sentences are just so, so good >///<

Thank you for making this!! If you're going to write more about him, I'm so looking forward to reading it!! ;w;

Woah... This VN is really beautiful: amazing art, great voice acting, intriguing story that leaves readers wanting more. I'm personally so, so impressed by the talking animation - it's super cool how he really looks like he's speaking what is heard!! :O That's an amazing experience, I felt very immersed and drawn into the story. It's a very well-done VN!!

Thank you so much for making this!

Ooh I love this vibe! The small stop before the afterlife door is always a charming place, and the people we'll meet there always picks my curiosity. Silas is very beautiful, I like him a lot!!

Thank you for making this!! It's a great first VN from you!! ^o^

OMG, my heart... This is so heartbreaking. :')) Her lines are mesmerising, your writing is as beautiful. Her voice is so soulful, magnificent voice acting right there. Both writing and VA compliment each other wonderfully! The art is very soft and lovely, it gets us to the vibe, especially during some tenses and changes. The bgm makes everything flow. It's really lovely!

Thank you for making this, I loved the experience a lot!!!

Ooh yay, you did it!! Thank you very much!! 🍦

Aaa I'm glad to hear that!! Writing this was hard and took me so many days to wrap everything up ;-; making the art was very fun, I'm happy you loved her outfit, I think it's really cute too!! Thank you very much for playing!!🍦

Aaa thank you so much!! Making the art was really fun so I'm glad to hear that!! She loves her bananas yes ^o^ and don't worry, she got her ice cream alright haha... Thank you again for playing!! 🍦

Aaa why no commentary ;-; I would've loved to hear what you think when playing u_u but still thank you!

Aaaa thank you very muchy!!! 🍦

Aa reading the postmortem, I wonder if the man is still out there searching... It's as if this VN is this man's unsent letter to his mermaid... I hope he'll find his solace one day. <3

Beautiful and melancholy writing by Altila. I enjoyed it a lot, thank you for making this!

I played both versions and whoaaa it's really smart on how you solved the limitation!! :O I loved the enhanced version so much (so I understand the frustration that you had aaa) but the jam-compliance version is as cute, and it was really nice that you're able to pull it through!

Hiro's VNs are always so beautiful and lovely, I always enjoyed them all!! This one is super cute, I love the colours and the sprites are beautiful, the panning effect to show him laying down is really on point, I repeated it a few times, it's really good!!

Thank you for making this!! ^~^ I enjoyed it a lot.

Ooh yay! You did it!! ^o^ Thank you for playing!! 🍦

Yay!! You did it!!

Yes, writing this to fit under 1,000 words was really, really hard haha ;~; I needed a week-ish to decently wrap it up, and small adjustments were made until the very end. Lots of if statements and loops were coded to be able to fit everything just right.

The art was done in the last 3 days, and it was the fun part of the project haha - I'm glad to hear that! >w< The icons are very smol and cute haha!

Thank you very much Hiro!! 🍦

Aa don't worry! She's fine, she (probably) didn't get to eat it. ;;-;;

I hope you enjoy your ice cream!! (I want one too now ahaha)

Aaa first thank you for playing and recording this, I enjoyed watching it!! ;;w;;

And aa yes, it's not pure good choices vs bad choices to reach the endings. The formula is made so that you cannot be truthful or lie too much or she'll assume wrongly anyway.

In a way, I tried to make it more tricky since some choices don't affect the visible stats bcs there are hidden stats (like the offer to hug vs not - while it doesn't add to any stats, it pisses her ahaha), sorry if that was confusing. I should have written in the feature that there are 2 visible stats and 2 hidden stats (it's written now!) to take into account. >_< So thank you for that pointer!

I can probably think of making this more clear in future projects that I will do with choices and stats, so this is very helpful!

Thank you very much!! 🍦