I haven't played a visual novel in years, so this was a nice change of pace. The chibi art is really cute, and the dialogue is well written. Not sure if it was intentional or due to time constraints, but I like the use of simple backgrounds instead of detailed /realistic ones—they suit the chibi art style really well.
Unfortunately, like others have mentioned, I couldn’t progress past a certain point because the dialogue got stuck, so I’m not sure if there’s more to the gameplay.
Just a suggestion: it might help to add a way to differentiate the narrator’s lines from the characters’ dialogue. Sometimes I missed which character was speaking. Maybe you could leave out the speaker’s name for the narrator and use a different color for each character’s name. Also, the backlog is hard to read against bright backgrounds.
PS: Image of where I got stuck.