Well done! Incredible work for a gamejam. The graphics are magnificent, the texts are very well written, I also found the gameplay very accessible and it was very interesting to see all the dialogue options (even if you didn't have the character traits to unlock them!).
The soundscape is discreet, but just right.
If I had any advice to give, it would perhaps be to indicate to players which passages have already been consulted (by crossing them out or graying them out, for example).
I wasn't able to complete my discovery during my stream, but I'll be playing at the end of the demo, that's for sure! (sorry for my poor accent, though... im French)