Great job, I had fun playing it, reading the character comment was nice (the hell character complaining about the wall was a nice touch that made me smile) and congrats on the story board idea, I think is a wonderful idea to tell the story (that is not only text) that is also "time saving" on the developing side. You did a lot of things and put different things inside (even different mechanics) so I can imagine it was a LOT of work. I only had "an issue" with the jump from the platform to the one that was sliding right above you (I don't know if it was intentional to be that hard to pass it).
I mean it's already a little GAME that you could expand with more levels to use more the mechanics you've put into it. Bravo!!!