The tutorial part is nice. It's very clear. The idea is good too. I think artstyle needs some work though. Kinyas&Elaine

I had an issue getting onto the platform that was sliding to the right while you are going up… couldn’t figure out how to get onto it! The rest of the game that I played was pretty cool. Nice work!

Great job,  I had fun playing it, reading the character comment was nice (the hell character complaining about the wall was a nice touch that made me smile) and congrats on the story board idea, I think is a wonderful idea to tell the story (that is not only text) that is also "time saving" on the developing side. You did a lot of things and put different things inside (even different mechanics) so I can imagine it was a LOT of work. I only had "an issue" with the jump from the platform to the one that was sliding right above you (I don't know if it was intentional to be that hard to pass it). 
I mean it's already a little GAME that you could expand with more levels to use more the mechanics you've put into it. Bravo!!!

what a wild story! the player really can’t catch a break, really unfortunate for them! i also love the slideshow-style story, it works great for telling the story. however, i did find a bug, if you hold left or right while interacting with the door or the cross, the walking sound keeps playing after the animation. so it ends up with multiple walking sounds going at once. just thought i’d mention it. great job overall!

Interesting concept, though it can be a bit rough around the edges at times (stairs...). Nonetheless, the idea is solid and the levels are quite manageable. Well done! :)