The text on screen is SOOOO small, my damaged eyes cannot even perceive it's presence. In a similar vein you should not ever put white text against a turquoise background. It hurts, it hurts!
The controls for the game itself are pretty fun to play around with, breaching and flipping in the air especially. (Gura is the fidget spinner I never asked for) Gura looks cute in her maid outfit too, though I'm not sure she should be swimming around in the dirty water with her mouth open like that. (lol)
I'd like to see the corrupted elements fight back more, or try to get away maybe?
This entry is good, I like it.