The art style is very adorable and it was good to see a jam game having some amount of story to it. I mostly love narratives in games so it’s always a plus in my books. The mouse seemed to control weird but I believe that adds to the strength considering the theme.
To add some constructive criticism for this. Try to add more player feedback and try to exaggerate movement and actions. If something is happening on the screen that you want the player to be aware of, exaggerate it.
But it’s a good little game, so good work and Keep at it. It’s all part of the learning process.
Meanwhile, if you like you can play my entry at https://bit.ly/glitchIn