Solid track, captures the emotional impact of the scene very well.
I would however spend a little bit more time on the alignment: bring the score together with the visual cues. A few impactful shots had no music support (for the change happend too early/too late). Maybe trying to get away from the 8bar can help you. If the scene calls for it, you can do 7 or 9 (or even fractionals, if you're feeling particularily spicy :D), and noone would bat an eye.
Also, choir seems to be a bit too much "in your face", I'd bring it down and slap a reverb or two on that.
But again, solid track. Works well with the scene and stands it's ground on it's own.