The page looks pretty solid.
I appreciate that you took your time to format the text & the paragraphs. Not only on the game page, but the devlogs are pretty well-formatted too!
Though, I find the link color a little bit too hard to read against the background color. It could use some more contrast.
And I think it would be better to replace the last screenshot with another gameplay shot instead of the main menu.
Also, if you want to get feedback, I think you’d want to post it on Get Feedback instead of here.