SHRIEK
- As I promised, I left a comment shrieking about the end of Chapter 1.
Now for the real comment: Great writing, super hyped to see where this goes. Especially if those of us with the military background actually end up in charge of the navy while still being a part of the order, or at least something similar. Also, I'm not sure whether I'm hoping that is something like Venom (without the obvious bad side effects) or something else, either would be epic.
One thing I'm unclear on is the tech level. Is humanity on multiple planets? If so, are these 'ships' as in interstellar/hovercraft travel/combat, or 'ships' as in travels in big blue wet things,? (Meaning oceans, gulfs, bays, lakes, etc.) - If I missed something, that's probably on me.