- As I promised, I left a comment shrieking about the end of Chapter 1.
Now for the real comment: Great writing, super hyped to see where this goes. Especially if those of us with the military background actually end up in charge of the navy while still being a part of the order, or at least something similar. Also, I'm not sure whether I'm hoping that is something like Venom (without the obvious bad side effects) or something else, either would be epic.
One thing I'm unclear on is the tech level. Is humanity on multiple planets? If so, are these 'ships' as in interstellar/hovercraft travel/combat, or 'ships' as in travels in big blue wet things,? (Meaning oceans, gulfs, bays, lakes, etc.) - If I missed something, that's probably on me.
Ok, I'm really hoping Qora is friendly towards me she eventually shows back up, given how both of us are elves, and I killed the racists that she dissed.
"I do not wish for recompense by a daft noble who would give the humans in the group positions at court and wealth aplenty while gifting pretty, but virtually useless, items to the non-humans in the hopes that they will leave and never return." - Qora, who has become one of my favorite characters despite only showing up for one page in the prologue so far.
One thing I noticed that seems a bit odd: Gender is currently hidden in the settings. While it doesn't mean anything yet in the story, I am a little confused as to why it's there when all of the other identifying info on you (besides your name) hasn't come up yet.
Is the current spot a placeholder until the other identifying info comes up in the story?
So...good thing the barrier (removed for spoiler reasons) either way, because otherwise I'd feel a little bad about prioritizing the few in the moment.
Can't wait for the update, that's a horrible stopping point for the demo (for me, though it's great narrative-wise)
