Wolf, my most cherished Conway crew mate, how cruel fate is to us... to relive the prior pain with wine, but now with rum... At least we got to reread Day 1 supper with you. Also, dang, there's a lot of places for Raj 'bad ends' for lack of a better phrase. I mean, not hard to avoid, but the balls on MC is absolutely absurd when you look at some of the choices you can make with her. Or the blackmailing option with Arthur. Wild stuff for sure.
Glad we finally got to see the pay off with being able to convince Arthur to let us stay.
Typos time: "With one hand you hold the bottle of wine, hastily covered by your shirt ..." I brought rum, not wine after seeing Perce
"You fish for the buttons of your shirt and open two of them - just enough for you to guide the bottle of wine through." wine ref again
"You don't strike me as someone who would be prepared enough to bring something along for you can trade." Messy end - easiest to just swap 'can' for 'to'
"I just thought it would be nice to share some wine with you when ..." Wine ref
Somewhat confused by a certain sequence, you can obtain the rum and not be able to bring it with you on the first go around (too nervous, which is understandable I suppose), but also not bring it with you on the second go around when considerably more desperate with nothing to lose? I think that's more of a writing/characterization choice, but putting it here in case it was a mistake.
"It doesn't matter that much of you don't know one in particular..." 'of' -> 'if'
"I haven't sent a single one of of them." Doubled 'of'
"Anyone would be better than than a confidence man." Double 'than'