No problem, author. Happy to provide thoughts.
Yeah I get your point about the character being arrogant, obnoxious, etc. I guess my problem is, expanding upon what I've written already, with the fact that it's entirely uncharismatic. As I noted before, it's written more like an obnoxious Redditor than an obnoxious yet suave person. You get what I mean? And this is an RO, so to me, rather than the reaction being "okay this character is kinda annoying but I can see some charm," it causes a reaction more like, "okay, well, I definitely shouldn't pick any options involving this person, so that I can avoid this painful dialog." Lol.
I don't mean to be too negative or anything, or to repeatedly harp on one point. I'm just trying to clarify my perspective in case it helps during the time you sit down to re-read everything.
Wishing you success!