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On the Post Hoenn activities put "Kanto's Milk Tasting" instead "Mewtwo's Milk Tasting".I already told you about ambiguity:There is no sense that says 'Mewtwo' and you have all the Kanto girls.The same goes for the birthing scene of Hoenn girls text :when you describe that your children are running behind Maple in her house, put "Kanto" not "Mewtwo".After all you don't know if the MC (like me) obtained all Kanto Legendarys,ALL in the literal way(Sub,Legend and Mythic),which is my case (I have the Kanto birds, Mewtwo and Mew).Fix that buddy (I don't want to see just 'Mewtwo' and the other Kanto girl invisible when you refer to Kanto Harem,ok?),and take in consideration in Unova with Jhoto,Pikachu ,Kanto and upcomig Legendary girl's children in Maple house in future updates writing the last text in the birthing scenes,Unova counts(example in Unova update in the Hoenn birthing scene:"You see your Kanto and Jhoto children playing with your cheerful Pichus,and Maple laughing loudly with their misichiefs")

Oh,and I already see that you always put how all the birthing of the non Legendary happened,but I'm depressed and sad (for my feelings seeing the texts and playing as MC ) that you don't write the birthing scene in a general way(writing that you entry,not to attend the Mewtwo's/Ho-oh and Lugia's birthing labor but all your Kanto/Jhoto girls labor).It puts me sad that MC learns how happened the labor via Mapple call,and not by living himself.In a few words:Writing that MC attend all the girls birthing is a best scene that attend default girl(the Legendary).Just a comment but is your choice to makes changes in this matters.It's ok with the Maple update about Sub and Mythic's labor and the photos in the Pregnancy Checkup,but is not sufficient.Just commenting.

POV Description(Maple:Oh,and about your other girls,their birthings all suceeded in (text description):

MC (and random player) Default POV:Oh, it's good to see,I go to check up on them and my eggs. *says cheerly*

Firewolf as MC

Firewolf(Me): Oh...*sightly shocked and a little happy*It's nice Mapple.I go later,bye *hangs the PokeGear feeling terrible😩😔😭 about learn that losed his other girls labor*

Mewtwo(in Hoenn)/Ho-oh,Lugia(in Sinnoh)/other Legend in Unova updates and beyond releases:Master(or Darling,I don't like that of a lover calling me Master even if is a scenario of lover that is you slave),it's ok, don't blame for that,your girls will understand that you were attend me/us.*the girl(s) embraces and consoles me while together are caresing their eggs*

(Later in each Sub/Myth room,general scene)

Me:Hi, honey*greeting the girl(s) and caresing our eggs,looking sad,the girl(s) ask me why I am sad* Is just,hah...I losed your lays.I know you are not mad,but*I embrace her/them(in Latis case)*Sorry for no seeing that *starting to sob,and saying sorry embracing her/them😢😢😭😭*

The girl(s):No,no,Master(Darling),it's ok,don't cry.*feeling the depressed state and consoling him,with embrace and caresing together their eggs*.

I just write the scene to show how I really feel as MC about losing the non Legendary Pokémon laying (and the lack of the full experience for obvious and understandable reasons) (sorry if I write bad,I just know English (I speak Spanish,told in another comment and is all is hand writed without translator)

Oh and.....,.......when you will release the Unova(Teselia in Spanish) update?...one of my POV female look's Legendary in the real Pokémon games(along with Cresselia and Latias (this one obvoiusly),Mesprit and (yep) Suicune),Reshiram is featured in that region (and coincidentally in trailer pictures)

Brpdchainsaw39 days ago

Okay, first off, you want me to make changes, you ask, POLITELY.
The way you've written this, sounds like your making demands, I get that you said your English isn't great, I understand if you didn't mean it to sound like that, but that's how it comes a across.

But to give a couple of answers to what you've said.

It's MEWTWO's Milk Tasting because Mewtwo hosts it at the end of each Chapter.

The Subs and Mythicals don't get laying scenes because generating those images is tricky and takes a lot of time, so I'm keeping it to the Main Legends only.

Firewolf39 days ago (10 edits)

I asked politely,and if i'm no polite in your POV,sorry.Yeah, those are demands,but it was no my intention to show my request like that. Its your game,don't feel pressured.I recommend that change to include the other girls if they were catched (is my case,I sayed earlier),and is more aestethic and parallel with "Jhoto Milk Tasting",you understand?

And about the birthing scene,I don't say a birthing scene or each type, just that make the text feel in a more general way like the MC is with all region(Kanto or Jhoto in these cases) girls in their childbirth is a more cute scene,but it's your game,buddy,I'm a bit mad but I like your game and I want to improve it.But it's too much with generating and writing,I understand you.Your game is 10/10,but with a bit of effort is much better,but for your reasons,you work calmly and I don't want to pressure a lot.The comment for the birthing scene was to show my feelings,they are no related directly to my request of name's change

So,asking polite...and with my reasons from the first text:Can you put "Kanto Milk Tasting",even if is Mewtwo the host of the event?Make that change when you end the first half or the full update of Unova,or when do you feel right ok?Sorry to burst like that if I hurt you.

Oh by the way,nice picture of the Loppuny,I want a scene with MC and a Loppuny,and make them breed 'like rabbits' literally(and of course,the MC will have tiny Buneary)(Finally with my bit of sand to your project) .I wish to take her with the Legendary girls,if Maple approves it.

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