Good composing overall.
I'd say maybe the elements are somewhat more straightforward, where I don't quite get as much of that "woa, what is that?" factor that the uniqueness factor is about.
Track one maybe feels a little squinched/closed?
Singing wise, sing from the belly! Heh. Singing on key is tough - it takes a lot of practice doing it slowly, practicing the intervals. I think the melody is maybe a little narrow, like you could go around with it. Because you're singing it, it gives you a lot of leeway for experimentation.
Heh if you get around to my submission, I have been writing similar songs to the poems in Lord of the Rings/The Hobbit - they're on my soundcloud. Cool seeing someone else doing similar stuff.