I love the visuals and direction! It’s clear there wasn’t enough time to add sound effects, but even so, I see massive potential in this project. I’d suggest adding the ability to "skip" dialogue by displaying all the text with one button press and skipping to the next on a second press. This wouldn’t ruin the narrative but would make the reading process faster and more convenient. Additionally, allowing the character to move a bit faster would be helpful, especially when encountering dead ends in houses and having to backtrack (though maybe I missed a way to sprint).
As I mentioned, the narrative delivery and visuals are the strongest parts of this project—they were handled with such care, and it’s clear that’s where your strengths lie. Amazing work!