The composition here is really neat. I also like that you also went with a woodwind.
The image I posted I think really calls for woodwinds, so in my track I actually ended up using a real bamboo flute and two different virtual woodwind instruments.
I also like that the composition isn't like crazy predictable either and moves around. It also definitely has this vibe that is maybe sort of like jazz-inspired indie rock like Sondre Lerche.
I think my main critique is that the mix is maybe a little flat and the dynamics are maybe a little flat as well. One of my biggest recommendations to alleviate this is that people play real instruments and midi controllers with velocity control into their tracks to humanize everything and make the articulation so much more potent.
Overall though, excellent work!