I think mix and composition are good on a technical level, but I had to cut a bit on the listenability as I felt lost sometimes, having to hear more than once to try and grasp why somethings were so pleaseant, like the 50sec passage, but then stuff like the extreme loud reversed voices that just seemsd out of place and detracted from something that I was enjoying.
Don't take me wrong , it's a very interesting submission, gave you an extra on creativity(which was the main goal of the jam), but I barely felt the theme, you grasped some oriental harmonies but I wouldn't classify that was a correlation to the theme, than again could just be me having a hard time interpeting it.
take care :)