Nice arrangement overall, I like the storytelling musically that you put together, its already been said but most of what to work on is the expression and modulation playing on your instruments so we don't feel any cut in the mix also strings voicing, especially when you play the melody in sixth it will probably better to use another instruments and play octaves with strings and the sixth going to woodwinds for exemple it will create a nicer texture. Also bonus tip for screenshot daw, you can just upload a screenshot in your main page and it will automatically transfer to your submission page :) Good job