I really enjoyed the concept of this game. I do have a few points of feedback:
1. Personally, I am not a fan of text-based games, so I think shortening the dialogue or adding more graphics (like talking to an NPC, reading a story book, etc) would help players be more engaged.
2. I would've loved to see more art since the gameplay was very simple. Adding more sound effects, art and maybe even some particles would really help give a polish feel.
Overall, this is a great start. Good job!