I really appreciate the detailed feedback! I will be updating the game soon with some minor bug fixes and quality of life improvements, however, I plan to keep developing this game post-jam by adding new levels (reworking old ones as well), diving a bit more into the theme and new platformer mechanics. Celeste/Celeste Classic was my main inspiration. I've never heard of Gris before, but since it's on sale this week I just bought it since it seems like a good game to take inspo from. Thank you for playing!
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I really enjoyed the concept of this game. I do have a few points of feedback:
1. Personally, I am not a fan of text-based games, so I think shortening the dialogue or adding more graphics (like talking to an NPC, reading a story book, etc) would help players be more engaged.
2. I would've loved to see more art since the gameplay was very simple. Adding more sound effects, art and maybe even some particles would really help give a polish feel.
Overall, this is a great start. Good job!
Thought this was a really interesting game idea/concept. Graphics looked great! Some feedback I'd give is to update the camera so it doesn't strictly follow the player and to make the background tiles more distinct because it was hard to tell if I jump on it a few times. Would love to see this game finished, great job!