Thank you for making this beautiful VN! Holy fuck, with like a few hundred CGs, vocal tracks (are songs made for the game too, btw?), it's like watching an anime, but better (i am more into VNs :D), it must be a labor of love!
I am now regretting i grabbed it just at min price, but i'll do my best to spread a word! Btw, my suggestion: make a Demo please! It will make more people try the game.
Spotted a few minor mistakes here and there, but nothing too serious:
- "phoenix part i can't believe" (should be "can"?)
- "and you're... a pervert." (says Hibiki instead of Wendy)
- "What the hell do you two think" (same)
- "The plane crash, her arrival at the temple" (what plane crash? :D)
- "Oh, I don;t think so"
- styled font doesn't have some glyphs (like, Māui displayed as M▯ui for me)
I like occasional use of Japanese words, it is cute
I'm just a little sad that they never said "I love you" at the end in this part, that keeps my heart from feeling full, but other than that it was perfect! :D
Thank you for leaving such a kind Review!
I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed the story! This was my passion project, and I put a whole lot of work into getting it done.
I do think I went a little overboard with all the Cgs though. Yes, I partnered with someone to make all those original tracks, Im glad you enjoyed them!
I would love if you could spread the word too! Ive been working on promoting but find the process pretty difficult, Im also working on getting this on Steam!
And an "I love you" is coming. I'm saving it for the next part, so hopefully, all the kissing scenes kept you situated. Please follow my Instagram for updates on my future projects!
And also, Thank you so much for all those errors! I'll fix those up and get updated builds out as soon as possible, alongside a demo version!
