interesting layout! definitely room for improvement in the sounds (the resonating pad that begins at 0:57 gets a bit loud by 1:21. maybe it could be widened spatially? i feel like it could use more high end but its muffly sound might be intentional).
composition-wise it's interesting if a bit patient. i think i was supposed to understand some larger story throughout the piece, but i never did, even aided by the descriptions. for a piece that seems to have many separate story beats, i'd appreciate a more detailed explanation of what each part means :)