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awesome work, a good variety of styles! i'm afraid i won't have time to read through your journal but it's wonderful you've kept one to record your process (i should start doing that :D).

the beginning of "The Far Reaches" reminded me of Kyle Hnedak's "Forest Meadow", and i couldn't get the comparison out of my head for the rest of your submission - the styles you chose even resembled some of my favorites from Kyle's work on Death's Gambit.

i think the orchestration in 'Ethereal' is excellent. 

the strings in 'Festival Of Souls' struggle with the vivid writing, and i actually think the violins are doing too much right off the bat. structurally, i'd appreciate an intro section that introduces some percussion and the lower staccato before gradually introducing the high string section (maybe the melody is played by a single voice once, before having the full section support it the next time around). fully engaging the strings right away feels sudden and kicks the dynamic energy up to a 100 right away, and since that doesn't change throughout the minute or so the track plays, it gets a bit tiring. thankfully, the track doesn't overstay its welcome - but i think i could enjoy it for a lot longer with some changes to arrangement. 

aside from my comments there, i think it's a well-rounded submission stylistically and compositionally. i'm glad i still had the chance to hear an 'unpolished' version of your work. i apologize in advance if i'm being disrespectful!

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Feedback is always great, so nothing disrespectful about it ๐Ÿ˜‰.

I hear what you mean with the Death's Gambit track. I didn't want to go with just using a lot of Japanese/Asian instruments to fit the painting, so i used a lot of stereotypical progression/melody stylings from stuff like anime shows for the first track, which the Death's Gambit track seems to Be influenced by too ๐Ÿ˜„.

Festival of souls and most of the other tracks could've used a lot more work since a lot of then are pretty much just the first sketches of the tracks ๐Ÿ˜…, thats why it its just the one main section without a proper start and end. I just lost all motivation to work on then anymore later on the jam... ๐Ÿ˜”.

Agreed with everything you mentioned, maybe a someday i'll actually FIX/finish theae properly ๐Ÿ˜‚.

You should totally give keeping a journal a try! Just writing ideas/thoughts down on paper while working on tracks really helps the brain to get working (at least for me).

Glad you liked then!

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good luck with the polish if you ever get down to it. see you next jam! -w-